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Here is my Critique:
Cosplayers:
All 5 scouts are beautiful and have done a wonderful job at making their outfits. Both Sailor Moon and Sailor Mars are "right on" with their poses. I Love their smiles and the fact that they are looking straight ahead. Sailor Jupiter's face is shadowed like others have pointed out and her pose looks a little stiff, not relaxed like the other scouts. I feel that both Sailor Venus and Mercury should be looking straight ahead like the others and I think that all of the scouts should be smiling.
Photography & Background:
The colorful background and the floor are perfect for this shot. The colors bring out the scouts Cosplay outfits even more which is a nice effect. The angle of the shot is unusual and caught my attention. If the girls are centered in the photo I feel that will help things out. I noticed that the photographer took the shot from the left. The angle helps to bring out the colors of the wall but It also casts a shadow on the scouts faces. I would try a few different angles to help eliminate the shadowing effect. Also I would suggest trying a straight on shot and working with that too. Extra lighting could be used in a straight on shot to minimize the background shadows that the girls are making.
Overall:
This group of Sailor Scouts have a great look about them. With some work this shot could be even better. They couldn't have picked a better location. Great job and If the photo is redone I would Love to see how things turn out.
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